Rains ! They always make you smile. People like me in Delhi are suffering from the super hot weather and it just rained ! Ahh- the bliss. It felt so good that I wrote whatever was coming to my mind. On second read I felt like I wrote like a child – but then rains do make you wish to return to childhood and splash around !! Enjoy the rains and leave back your comments and experiences about rains.
Rain Rain..you let go of all pain you bring me the coolness from the tiring day and its heat a gift that makes me joyous and upbeat I want to get drenched and let you soak me wet there is no better feeling from the cool breeze that you get You bring back those memories of childhood the innocent one making boats and splashing water AAh ! there was nothing better to be done Here I sit with a wish That you pour all through the night The breeze and the rains playing the lullaby I so desire !![]()
This was the first cut unadulterated version of poem inspired by the much desired rains. Would love suggestions/feedback to improve the same.
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Wow! I loved your poem! And the pics are just DIVINE!!
Keep up the good work!
Alia
http://aliascreativelife.blogspot.com/
@Alia – thanks a lot
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remind me of my childhood, the joy of the rain.Too vivid…:)))
@charu – thanks for reading !
Try Mumbai Rains n ur poem awesome connection
@pallavi – They say Mumbai rains are a pain..for it never stops !
.. But yes the rains…’ye baarish ki boondien’ ….memories flow from childhood to now..!
I love the smell and feel of the rain after sunny days. It really lightens the mood and give you time to refresh, to recharge and reflect:))
@Sajeev – Indeed it does. The first rains rejuvenates the soul. Thanks for the read.
very nice pics and very touching poem
@Elena – thanks ! keep reading
Dear Gaurav, good pictures and nice poem. With your permission, I would like to use these pics & poem (acknowledging them as yours) in an in-house training program.
Dear Sreejith – I would be glad to have my composition used for the benefit of your training. Do let me know some details of your training program so that I can share the same for the benefit of the readers
vry n!ce picss
Nice frnd,I also have made a poem on rainy day at-http://njpoems.wordpress.com If you like it,plz comment on it.
Gaurav, bravo. Your rain pic n poem are nice and touching. I hv shared in the facebook on Christmas Day which was a very wet day in Kuching.
@George – thanks and glad you liked it. Merry Christmas !
Very nicely written, and love the subject. Rain
awosome
@MaggieLove- thanks a lot
@vijay – glad you liked
i love your poems, and i want take some picture from this poem! thanks!
@hoshiworld – Thanks. Sure you can use them.
thanks