Have you ever realized that even small thing can cause so much ideas to float around. Hope you like this one. As always, I am a beginner so all support/feedback/suggestions most welcome !!
And just when I thought it was starting to fade Your note popped out staring me in the face Memories all spread like they were just afresh Heart skipped a beat as if on my first date Reality shook me back; for dream world is over What lies ahead is a life of different flavor One day you'll see that I was right all through But this ain't a movie so I won't be there for you!
good un boss! keep posting
brilliant attempt and move on dude π
FOR YOU,
memories are afresh coz u ve a heart of gold;
she is going to agnize as her qualms get unfold.
@sudarshan – thanks !
@deepak sir – thanks sir ! for the appreciation and the beautiful lines which mean a lot ! and there is nothing personal to these lines.. but i will move on to happy version as you are advising π !
Brilliant man! you’re getting better with every composition!
Keep it up!
Take care:)
Beautiful!!
@amar – π thanks ! appreciation means a lot !
@viyoma – thanks π
deep from the soul..
straight from the heart π
@roserox24 – you got that right ! thanks π
Great effort Gaurav.. keep it up.. appreciate..
@kamalika – thanks for the appreciation !
The words depict something not known to me,
She does’nt deserve you, so just let it be!
Life is like waves with some ups n some downs,
Wait for your ngel, she is searching you with a crown! π π
The words depict something not known to me,
She does’nt deserve you, so just let it be!
Life is like waves with some ups n some downs,
Wait for your ngel, she is searching you with a crown! π π
A really neat piece.
@Indigenous Indian – beautiful lines !
@charu – thanks π !
For the love of Poetry!